AKTUWAL NA HALIMBAWA · WORD TRACKED CHANGES, PAGKATAPOS AY POLISH
Isang liham pangkalusugan para sa mga magulang na pinasimple gamit ang track changes, pagkatapos ay sa Polish
Isang lokal na koponan sa proteksyong pangkalusugan ang tumanggap ng template ng liham ng UK Health Security Agency para sa mga magulang matapos ang isang kaso ng meningococcal disease sa paaralan. Hiniling nila sa na isulat itong muli para sa mga magulang na may mababang antas ng literasiya, bilang mga tracked change sa parehong file ng Word, upang matanggap o matanggihan ng kanilang consultant ang bawat pagbabago.
Isinulat muli ng ang katawan ng liham sa maikling mga pangungusap at pinanatili ang bawat medikal na katotohanan, heading, contact, at style. Matapos tanggapin ng consultant ang mga pagbabago, ginawa nito ang kanilang dalawang edit bilang mga bagong tracked change, at pagkatapos ay isang malinis na kopya sa Polish para sa isang paaralan na may maraming pamilyang Polish.
1Ang UKHSA template letter: mahahabang pangungusap at salitang medikal
Important: meningococcal disease information
A pupil at your child’s school has been admitted to hospital with suspected meningococcal disease which can cause both meningitis and septicaemia. Meningitis is when bacteria reach the meninges (the lining around the brain and spinal cord) and cause dangerous swelling. Septicaemia is when bacteria enter the bloodstream and cause blood poisoning.
- 19.8 → 7.9average na bilang ng salita bawat pangungusap
- 169mga tracked na pagdaragdag at pagbura na tatanggapin o tatanggihan
- 0mga heading, style, o cell sa table na nabago bukod sa hiniling na pag-aayos ng typo
- 2mga talatang naapektuhan ng kahilingan 2, at wala nang iba
Buksan ang mga totoong file
Ito ang mga aktwal na file mula sa run. I-download ang mga ito at buksan sa Word: ang mga tracked copy ay nagbubukas nang may markang bawat pagbabago.
Kung saan nagmula ang file: GOV.UK, UK Health Security Agency, “Communication with parents following a school case of IMD” (patnubay sa meningococcal disease). Naglalaman ng impormasyon ng pampublikong sektor na lisensyado sa ilalim ng Open Government Licence v3.0. Hindi pa nasuri o na-endorso ng UKHSA ang halimbawang ito.
01 · ANG SIMULANG FILE
Isang template na may tatlong pahina na may sariling mga style at table na may pinagsamang cell
Ipinaliliwanag ng liham ang meningitis, septicaemia, at sepsis, kung sino ang nakakakuha ng antibiotics, kung kailan tatawag sa NHS 111 o 999, at ang mga bakunang natatanggap ng mga bata sa bawat edad. Ang mga pangungusap nito ay may haba na mga 20 salita, na may mga salitang gaya ng “meninges” at “overwhelming immune response”.
Ito ay isang tunay na template ng Word: may mga custom na style para sa heading at body, dalawang contact ng charity sa bullet style, mga dilaw na placeholder na “insert contact”, at isang table na may 13 sintomas kung saan ang kaliwang column ay pinagsasama ang dalawang row. Bawat isa sa mga ito ay kailangang manatili sa rewrite.

02 · KAHILINGAN 1
“Isulat itong muli para sa mga magulang na may mababang antas ng literasiya, bilang mga tracked change”
Ang itinipa ng koponan sa proteksyong pangkalusugan
This is the UKHSA template letter to parents after a school case of meningococcal disease (3 pages). Please rewrite the body text so parents with low literacy can follow it - short sentences, everyday words, reading age about 9-11. - Keep every medical fact: what meningitis, septicaemia and sepsis are, who gets antibiotics, when to call NHS 111 or 999, and all the vaccine ages - Keep the four section headings and the symptoms table as they are - in the table only fix the typo 'irritabilty' - Keep the two charity contacts and the yellow 'insert contact...' placeholders in the last paragraph unchanged - Keep the existing paragraph styles Please do it as tracked changes in this same Word file, so our consultant can accept or reject each edit.
Ang ginawa ng
- Isinulat muli ang mga talata sa katawan ng liham sa maikling mga pangungusap at pang-araw-araw na mga salita: ang “meninges” ay naging “ang lining sa paligid ng utak at spinal cord”.
- Pinanatili ang bawat katotohanang nakalista sa kahilingan, kabilang ang lahat ng edad para sa bakuna at ang catch-up para sa ika-25 kaarawan.
- Iniwan ang apat na heading, ang dalawang contact ng charity, at ang mga dilaw na placeholder kung ano ang mga ito; sa table, inayos lamang ang “irritabilty”.
- Pinanatili ang bawat paragraph style at ang pinagsamang cell sa table.
- Ibinigay ang liham nang dalawang beses: ang malinis na bagong bersyon at isang kopya ng orihinal na may bawat pagbabago bilang isang tracked change sa Word.
Important: meningococcal disease information
Following a case in school (please read all pages)
Dear Parent or Guardian
4A pupil at your child’s school has been admitted to hospital with suspectedis in hospital. Doctors think it is meningococcal disease which. This disease can cause both meningitis and septicaemiatwo illnesses. One is meningitis. Meningitis is when bacteriameans germs reach the meninges (the lining around the brain and spinal cord) and cause. The lining swells, and this is very dangerous swelling. The other illness is septicaemia. Septicaemia is when bacteria enter the bloodstream and cause blood poisoning. means germs get into the blood. They poison the blood.
Both forms of meningococcal disease can trigger sepsis – an overwhelming and life-threatening immune response to infection which can lead to organ failure. illnesses can cause sepsis. Sepsis is when the body fights infection too hard. This can harm the body a lot. It can stop organs from working. It can kill.
This letter givestells you some information about the disease. There is no reason for you to make any change in the school routine and no reason for children to be keptPlease do not worry. Your child can still go to school. School will run as normal. No child needs to stay at home.
How the disease spreads
The meningococcal bacteria very rarely spreads from child to child withinThis disease does not often spread in class or school. The bacteria that cause the illness live naturally ingerms live at the back of the throat and can spread between people in droplets. They pass in tiny drops from the mouth and nose. Many people carry the bacteria in their throats without becoming unwellgerms. They do not feel ill.
Preventing the spread of meningococcal disease
The best way toAntibiotics stop the disease from spreading. is by giving antibiotics to theOnly very close family contacts of the patient with the illnessneed them. That usuallyoften means that only people who live in the same house as the sick child need treatment. School contacts are only very rarely at risk. home. Children at school are almost never at risk.
The people who need treatment have already been identified and treatedhealth team has found those people. They have had their treatment.
Symptoms of meningococcal disease
The risk of anotherAnother case in the school is very small, butunlikely. But it is sensible to be aware ofhelps to know the main signs. and symptoms of meningococcal meningitis and septicaemia, outlined below. You can see them in the table below.
Some common signs and symptoms of meningococcal disease
High temperature
Rapid breathing
Vomiting or diarrhoea and stomach cramps
Joint or muscle pain
Cold hands and feet
Severe headache
Pale blotchy skin
Stiff neck
Confusion and/or irritabiltyirritability
Dislike of bright light
Drowsiness or difficult to wake
Rash or bruising rash
Seizures or fits
OneYou may see one or more of these symptoms may develop and they can appearsigns. They can come in any order.
Meningococcal disease can be hard to identify at first because it can be like a bad case of flu. However, anyone affected with meningococcal disease will usually become seriously ill within a few hours. You should keep checking your child if they are unwell and contact your GP (family doctor) or NHS 111 for advice if you have any concerns. At first it can look like flu. So it can be hard to spot. A sick person can get very ill within hours. Keep checking your child if they feel unwell. If you are worried, call your GP or NHS 111.
If you becomeare worried about your child’s condition, particularly if they are getting worse, seek medical help urgently at the closest A&E Department or by dialling 999. , act fast. If your child gets worse, get help urgently. Go to A&E or call 999.
Be watchful and use your instincts. Early treatment can be life savingKeep a close watch. Trust what you feel. Getting help early can save a life.
Protecting against meningococcal disease
It is important to be aware that meningococcal disease is caused by different groups of meningococcal bacteria. In the UK meningococcal disease is almost always caused by one of four meningococcal groups commonly known as MenB, MenC, MenW or MenY. These groups of meningococcal disease can be prevented with vaccines. MenA disease is rare in the UK but this can also be prevented by vaccinationMany types of germs cause this disease. In the UK it is almost always MenB, MenC, MenW or MenY. Vaccines can stop these types. MenA is rare in the UK. A vaccine can stop MenA too.
The following meningococcalUK gives these vaccines are offered as part of theas routine UK schedule:
MenB vaccine (which protects againststops most cases of MenB disease), routinely offered as. Babies get 3 doses given as part of the infant immunisation programme. They get them at 8 weeks, 16 weeks and 12 months of age. Children born in the UK. All children born on or after 1 May 2015 have beenwere offered this vaccine.
Hib-MenC vaccine (which protects againststops MenC disease), routinely offered. Children get it at 12 months. asIt is part of the routine childhood immunisation programmevaccine plan.
MenACWY vaccine (which protects againststops MenA, MenC, MenW and MenY disease) routinely offered. Young people get it at 13 to 15 years of age. old.
AnyoneDid your child miss the teen MenACWY vaccine? If they were born on or after 1 September 1996 who was eligible but missed their teenage MenACWY vaccine can still have the vaccine, they can still have it. They can have it up to their 25th birthday. Anyone who isAre you older and starting university for the first time? You can still have the vaccineit up to theiryour 25th birthday. For a young personIf your child is still at school speak to their, ask the school provider to arrange vaccination otherwise you will need to make an appointment with theirvaccine team. If not, book with your GP practice.
Please ensurecheck your child is up to date with their routine vaccinations with their. Ask your GP practice. Even if theyyour child had MenC vaccine when they were younger, it is important that teenagers get the MenACWY vaccine as it boosts protection against MenC disease and protects against more groups of meningococcal disease. as a baby, they still need MenACWY as a teen. It boosts MenC cover. It also guards against more types.
Be watchfulWatch for signs and symptoms even if your child is up to date with their vaccinations as available vaccines do not protect against all causes of the diseaseafter vaccines. Vaccines do not stop every cause.
All meningococcal vaccines offered to eligible children as part of routine programmes are freely available on the NHS. Vaccines may be available privately for those who are not eligible under these programmes. Meningococcal disease can affect anyone of any age but the national immunisation programmes targetRoutine vaccines are free on the NHS for eligible children. If you are not eligible, you may pay for them privately. This disease can affect any age. But the NHS plan guards those most at risk.
Further information on meningococcal disease is available from:
8• The Meningitis Research Foundation, www.meningitis.org telephone: 0808 800 3344
11• Meningitis Now, www.meningitisnow.org telephone: 0808 80 10 388 helpline email address: [email protected]
16If you need further support or advice, please contact insert contact details or call us insert contact telephone number.
19Sinuri namin ito: ang tracked copy ay may 71 pagdaragdag at 98 pagbura; ang mga paragraph style ay tumutugma sa template nang isa-isa; ang limang heading ay hindi nagbago; ang table ay nananatiling 7 row at 2 column na may pinagsamang cell, at ang tanging pagbabago nito ay “irritability”; ang mga edad para sa bakuna, NHS 111, 999, A&E, at parehong contact ng charity ay naroon lahat; ang mga placeholder ay pinapanatili ang kanilang dilaw na highlight.
03 · KAHILINGAN 2
“Tanggapin ang lahat, pagkatapos ay gumawa ng dalawang pagbabago bilang mga bagong tracked change”
Ang itinipa ng koponan sa proteksyong pangkalusugan
The consultant has reviewed it. Please: 1. Accept all the tracked changes from your rewrite. 2. Make sure the word 'septicaemia' is used (not replaced by a simpler word), with a short explanation in brackets the first time it appears, e.g. 'septicaemia (blood poisoning)'. 3. In the last paragraph, replace 'insert contact details' with 'the Thames Valley Health Protection Team' and 'insert contact telephone number' with '0344 225 3861', and remove the yellow highlight. Make changes 2 and 3 as new tracked changes.
Ang ginawa ng
- Nagtrabaho mula sa malinis na bersyon, na siyang liham kung saan tinanggap ang lahat ng pagbabago sa kahilingan 1.
- Pinanatili ang salitang “septicaemia” at nagdagdag ng “(blood poisoning)” sa unang beses na lumitaw ito.
- Inilagay ang pangalan at numero ng telepono ng koponan sa halip na ang dalawang placeholder at tinanggal ang dilaw na highlight.
- Ibinigay ang bagong tracked copy na nagpapakita lamang ng mga pagbabagong ito.
A pupil at your child’s school is in hospital. Doctors think it is meningococcal disease. This disease can cause two illnesses. One is meningitis. Meningitis means germs reach the lining around the brain and spinal cord. The lining swells, and this is very dangerous. The other illness is septicaemia (blood poisoning). Septicaemia means germs get into the blood. They poison the blood.
Protecting against meningococcal disease
If you need further support or advice, please contact insert contact detailsthe Thames Valley Health Protection Team or call us insert contact telephone number0344 225 3861.
Sinuri namin ito: ang bagong tracked copy ay may eksaktong 3 pagdaragdag at 2 pagbura, lahat sa loob ng dalawang talatang iyon; walang natitirang highlight sa huling talata; ang mga style at ang table ay hindi nagbago.
04 · KAHILINGAN 3
“Isang malinis na kopya ng huling liham sa wikang Polish”
Ang itinipa ng koponan sa proteksyong pangkalusugan
Now make a Polish translation of the final letter as a separate Word file. Translate the accepted text only - the Polish copy should have no tracked changes. Keep the same headings, styles and the 2-column symptoms table, and leave all phone numbers, web addresses, the email address and the vaccine names (MenB, Hib-MenC, MenACWY) exactly as they are.
Ang ginawa ng
- Gumawa ng hiwalay na file ng Word mula sa huling liham at isinalin ito, nang walang anumang tracked change.
- Pinanatili ang mga style ng template, ang mga heading, at ang table ng mga sintomas na may 2 column at pinagsamang cell.
- Iniwan ang 999, NHS 111, bawat numero ng telepono, parehong web address, email address, at MenB, Hib-MenC, at MenACWY nang eksakto ayon sa pagkakasulat.
Ważne: informacje o chorobie meningokokowej
Po przypadku zachorowania w szkole (prosimy przeczytać wszystkie strony)
Szanowni Rodzice i Opiekunowie
Uczeń ze szkoły Państwa dziecka przebywa w szpitalu. Lekarze podejrzewają chorobę meningokokową. Choroba ta może wywołać dwie choroby. Jedną z nich jest zapalenie opon mózgowych. Zapalenie opon mózgowych oznacza, że zarazki docierają do błon otaczających mózg i rdzeń kręgowy. Błony te puchną, a to jest bardzo niebezpieczne. Drugą chorobą jest posocznica (zakażenie krwi). Posocznica (zakażenie krwi) oznacza, że zarazki dostają się do krwi. Zatruwają krew.
Obie choroby mogą prowadzić do sepsy. Sepsa występuje wtedy, gdy organizm zbyt mocno walczy z zakażeniem. Może to bardzo uszkodzić organizm. Może spowodować, że narządy przestaną działać. Może prowadzić do śmierci.
Ten list zawiera informacje o tej chorobie. Prosimy się nie martwić. Państwa dziecko może nadal chodzić do szkoły. Szkoła będzie działać normalnie. Żadne dziecko nie musi zostawać w domu.
Jak rozprzestrzenia się choroba
Choroba ta rzadko rozprzestrzenia się w klasie lub w szkole. Zarazki żyją w tylnej części gardła. Przenoszą się w drobnych kropelkach z ust i nosa. Wiele osób nosi te zarazki. Nie czują się chore.
Zapobieganie rozprzestrzenianiu się choroby meningokokowej
Antybiotyki powstrzymują rozprzestrzenianie się choroby. Potrzebują ich tylko bardzo bliskie kontakty rodzinne. Zwykle oznacza to tylko osoby mieszkające w tym samym domu. Dzieci w szkole prawie nigdy nie są zagrożone.
Zespół ds. zdrowia odnalazł te osoby. Otrzymały one leczenie.
Objawy choroby meningokokowej
Kolejny przypadek zachorowania w szkole jest bardzo mało prawdopodobny. Warto jednak znać główne objawy. Można je zobaczyć w poniższej tabeli.
Niektóre częste oznaki i objawy choroby meningokokowej
Wysoka gorączka
Szybkie oddychanie
Wymioty lub biegunka i bóle brzucha
Ból stawów lub mięśni
Zimne dłonie i stopy
Silny ból głowy
Blada, plamista skóra
Sztywność karku
Dezorientacja i/lub drażliwość
Unikanie jasnego światła
Senność lub trudności z obudzeniem
Wysypka lub wysypka z siniakami
Drgawki lub napady drgawek
Może wystąpić jeden lub więcej z tych objawów. Mogą pojawić się w dowolnej kolejności.
Na początku może to wyglądać jak grypa. Dlatego trudno to rozpoznać. Chora osoba może bardzo ciężko zachorować w ciągu kilku godzin. Obserwuj dziecko, jeśli źle się czuje. Jeśli się martwisz, zadzwoń do lekarza rodzinnego (GP) lub pod numer NHS 111.
Jeśli się martwisz, działaj szybko. Jeśli stan dziecka się pogarsza, poszukaj pomocy natychmiast. Zgłoś się na SOR (A&E) lub zadzwoń pod numer 999.
Uważnie obserwuj dziecko. Ufaj temu, co czujesz. Wczesna pomoc może uratować życie.
Ochrona przed chorobą meningokokową
Tę chorobę wywołuje wiele rodzajów zarazków. W Wielkiej Brytanii prawie zawsze są to MenB, MenC, MenW lub MenY. Szczepionki mogą chronić przed tymi typami. MenA występuje w Wielkiej Brytanii rzadko. Szczepionka chroni również przed MenA.
W Wielkiej Brytanii rutynowo podaje się następujące szczepionki:
Szczepionka MenB chroni przed większością zachorowań wywołanych przez MenB. Niemowlęta otrzymują 3 dawki. Podaje się je w 8. tygodniu, 16. tygodniu i 12. miesiącu życia. Tę szczepionkę zaproponowano wszystkim dzieciom urodzonym 1 May 2015 lub później.
Szczepionka Hib-MenC chroni przed chorobą wywołaną przez MenC. Dzieci otrzymują ją w 12. miesiącu życia. Jest ona częścią rutynowego kalendarza szczepień.
Szczepionka MenACWY chroni przed chorobami wywołanymi przez MenA, MenC, MenW i MenY. Młodzież otrzymuje ją w wieku od 13 do 15 lat.
Czy Twoje dziecko pominęło szczepienie MenACWY dla nastolatków? Jeśli urodziło się 1 September 1996 lub później, nadal może je otrzymać. Może je otrzymać do swoich 25. urodzin. Czy jesteś osobą starszą i po raz pierwszy zaczynasz studia? Nadal możesz je otrzymać do swoich 25. urodzin. Jeśli Twoje dziecko nadal chodzi do szkoły, zapytaj szkolny zespół ds. szczepień. Jeśli nie, umów się w przychodni lekarza rodzinnego.
Sprawdź, czy Twoje dziecko ma aktualne szczepienia. Zapytaj w przychodni lekarza rodzinnego. Nawet jeśli Twoje dziecko otrzymało szczepionkę MenC jako niemowlę, jako nastolatek nadal potrzebuje szczepionki MenACWY. Wzmacnia ona ochronę przed MenC. Chroni też przed większą liczbą typów.
Obserwuj objawy nawet po szczepieniach. Szczepionki nie chronią przed każdą przyczyną choroby.
Rutynowe szczepionki są bezpłatne w ramach NHS dla uprawnionych dzieci. Jeśli nie są Państwo uprawnieni, mogą Państwo zapłacić za nie prywatnie. Choroba ta może dotknąć osoby w każdym wieku. Program szczepień NHS chroni jednak osoby najbardziej zagrożone.
Dodatkowe informacje na temat choroby meningokokowej są dostępne w:
• The Meningitis Research Foundation, www.meningitis.org telefon: 0808 800 3344
• Meningitis Now, www.meningitisnow.org telefon: 0808 80 10 388 adres e-mail infolinii: [email protected]
Jeśli potrzebują Państwo dodatkowego wsparcia lub porady, prosimy o kontakt z Zespołem Ochrony Zdrowia Thames Valley lub o telefon pod numer 0344 225 3861.
Sinuri namin ito: walang mga tracked change sa file; parehong paragraph style at parehong 7x2 table; ang mga edad para sa bakuna ay nakasulat na “8. tygodniu”, “16. tygodniu”, “12. miesiącu”, “od 13 do 15 lat” at “25. urodzin”; ang linya ng contact ay nagpapangalan sa koponan ng Thames Valley at 0344 225 3861.
Dapat malaman: noong unang pinatakbo ang kahilingang ito, ang kopya sa Polish ay ginawa mula sa liham bago ang kahilingan 2. Inayos namin kung paano minamarkahan ng ang pinakabagong bersyon ng isang file, at ang kopyang ipinapakita rito ay ang muling pagpapatakbo ng parehong kahilingan sa parehong pag-uusap.
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Karamihan sa mga AI tool ay nagbabalik ng rewritten text na kailangan mo pang i-paste. Ang ang nag-e-edit sa iyong Word file, pinapanatili ang mga style at table nito, ibinibigay ang mga pagbabago bilang tunay na tracked changes, at isinasalin ang bersyong inaprubahan mo.
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