WORKED EXAMPLE · PROOFREADING IN WORD
Chairman’s letter proofread, then cut to a 600-word web version
A communications officer at a community bank received the annual report as a Word file. They asked to proofread the letter from the chairman in AP style, lightly, without touching the figures, a quotation from last year’s letter or the financial tables.
fixed a dangling modifier, smoothed awkward phrasing and joined three sentences the file conversion had split, all in the same file, and left every figure as written. Then it cut the letter from 1,093 to 600 words for the web, writing percentages as numerals and keeping the closing section in full.
1The upload: the bank's annual report, as a Word file
Message From the Chairman
Dear Fellow Shareholders:
Fiscal 2026
Fiscal 2027
A Final Word
Sincerely,
Financial Highlights
- 1,093 → 600words in the letter after request 2
- 3split sentences joined again
- 8"percent" figures changed to %, values kept
- 0edits outside the letter
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Where the file comes from: Provident Financial Holdings, Inc., 2026 Annual Report to Stockholders, filed with the SEC as Exhibit 13 to its Form 10-K. A public filing; the text belongs to the company.
01 · THE STARTING FILE
A 9-page annual report, letter on page 2
The file is a small listed bank’s annual report to its stockholders: a cover, the letter from the chairman, then Financial Highlights tables, shareholder information, the board and the branch list. Nine pages and six tables in one Word file.
We made this Word file from the public SEC filing, a web page, with LibreOffice. The conversion split three sentences across two paragraphs each, a common fault when a web page becomes a Word file. The prompt names all three places.

02 · REQUEST 1
"Proofread the letter, AP style, and keep it light"
What the communications officer typed
Please proofread the 'Message From the Chairman' (from 'Dear Fellow Shareholders:' down to Craig Blunden's signature block) with tracked changes, AP style.
- Fix grammar, punctuation and awkward phrasing, but keep the edits light.
- Don't change any figures or the meaning. Leave the way numbers are written ('61 percent', 'one percent') alone for now.
- The quotation from last year's letter in the first paragraph ('… the market is expecting … California real estate market.') must stay word for word.
- Three sentences were split into two paragraphs when the file was converted: after 'disciplined,', after 'this approach is the', and after 'the year ahead and beyond,'. Join each back into one paragraph.
- Don't touch the Financial Highlights tables or anything after the letter.What did
- Edited the letter inside the uploaded Word file. The text of every other page is unchanged.
- Fixed a dangling modifier: "As the largest independent community bank headquartered in Riverside County, I am proud" now reads "we are proud", here and in the next sentence.
- Made light AP-style fixes: "high-cost markets" with a hyphen, a spaced em dash in "fiscal 2026 — our eighth consecutive year", and "remains constant" for "remains a constant".
- Smoothed awkward phrasing, such as "Last year, I said" for "Last year, I described that", and dropped a few words the sentences did not need.
- Joined the three split sentences back into one paragraph each.
- Left the quotation from last year’s letter, every figure and the way each number is written exactly as they were.
The prompt asked for tracked changes, but wrote the edits straight into the file, so the redline below comes from ’s “Create track-changes report”, run on the before and after files.
Message From the Chairman
Dear Fellow Shareholders:
I am pleased to forward our Annual Report for fiscal 2026 highlighting our financial results. Last year I noted in the Chairman’s Message that “… the market is expecting the easing of monetary policy to resume later this calendar year but we are cognizant of the weaker employment data that was recently released and its potential downstream impact on the economy. We are also observing some weaknesses in the California real estate market.” A year later, after three successive quarter-point reductions in the federal funds rate in the latter part of 2025, the Federal Open Market Committee, or FOMC, has held rates steady. At present, the market does not appear to expect additional interest rate cuts for the remainder of this year and possibly into 2027. Indeed, some market observers believe a rate hike is possible later this year. We have also seen an important shift in the bond market. The U.S. Treasury yield curve emerged from its extended inversion and returned to a more normal upward slope. As short-term rates have been anchored by the federal funds rate, longer-term bond yields have been steadily rising, further steepening the yield curve. This movement reflects continued uncertainty regarding inflation, the state of the federal budget deficit and the potential for geopolitical developments to create supply-chain or energy-related pressures.
For banks, a steeper yield curve can be beneficial. A bank’s net interest margin benefits from the widening spread between the cost of deposits and other short-term funding and yields earned on loans. New loans are being originated at higher rates, and adjustable-rate loans are repricing upward. At the same time, higher long-term rates weigh on the real estate market, especially in high -cost markets such as California. Mortgage payments have become ever moreincreasingly unaffordable for prospective buyers, while many existing homeowners remain locked into mortgages with rates well below current levels. At the current level of mortgage rates, residential purchase and refinancing activities have been curtailed. Even so, California real estate values have been resilient. Prices have generally held up well across the markets we serve, reflecting the underlying strength in the economy and limited housing supply in our local communities.
In this evolving market, one thing remains a constant: we are well positioned, supported by a strong capital position and pristine credit quality. Our long-standing credit culture has served us well and positioned the Company among the top performers across key credit quality metrics. Our goal is to remain good stewards of our capital by executing a strategy of disciplined, ¶
sustainable growth, conservative credit underwriting, and consistent returns of capital to our shareholders.
Fiscal 2026
Last year, I described thatsaid our fiscal 2026 Business Plan reflected measured growth in loans and retail deposits, disciplined control of operating expenses, and sound capital management. Our financial results, described in the following Financial Highlights, reflected improved earnings compared to the prior year, despite a moderate decline in total assets.
During fiscal 2026, as the yield curve normalized, we adjusted our strategy accordingly to support increased loan production. Following a 61 percent increase in loan production during fiscal 2025, we achieved an additional 32 percent increase in loan production in fiscal 2026. However, these production gains were fully offset by higher-than-normal levels of loan prepayments. As a result, our loans held for investment decreased by approximately one percent for the fiscal year. The deposit landscape remained challenging, as competition for deposits continued to be intense. Competitors of all sizes, including large national banks, aggressively marketed promotional deposit rates that remain elevated today, even as the FOMC lowered short-term rates in 2025. We made accommodations, as appropriate, to our pricing based on our evaluation of the customer relationships, while maintaining our pricing discipline, and augmented our funding needs with certificates of deposit and borrowings. Total deposits increased two percent during the fiscal year although transaction accounts declined three percent. Our net interest margin exceeded three percent for the year, reaching 3.09 percent, with the improvement driven primarily by the repricing of Federal Home Loan Bank advances to lower rates as they matured. Despite inflationary pressures, operating expenses increased by less than one percent for the fiscal year. Finally, we recorded no loan charge-offs during fiscal 2026 -— our eighth consecutive year without reporting a net charge-off.
Returning capital to our shareholders is a priority. During fiscal 2026, we maintained our quarterly cash dividend of $0.14 per share and increased our share repurchases to approximately 344,000 shares, compared to approximately 285,000 shares in fiscal 2025.
Fiscal 2027
As we look to fiscal 2027, our priorities remain consistent: measured growth in loans and retail deposits; disciplined expense management; and sound capital management. We believe this approach is the ¶
right course in an economy that continues to expand, while recognizing the need to remain cautious amid ongoing market and geopolitical uncertainties. We expect to continue returning capital to shareholders through dividends and share repurchases while maintaining sufficient capital to support our business strategy and withstand potential losses under adverse conditions. We remain committed to single-family residential, multi-family, and commercial real estate mortgage lending as our primary sources of asset growth and our retail branch network will continue to serve as the primary source of the Bank’s funding.
A Final Word
This year, Provident proudly celebrates the 70th anniversary of its founding, serving the great city of Riverside and its surrounding communities. As the largest independent community bank headquartered in Riverside County, I amwe are proud of our distinguished history as a trusted provider of banking services. Just as importantly, I amwe are proud of the commitment demonstrated throughout our organization to strengthen the communities we serve through volunteer service, charitable support and community investment. As we look to the year ahead and beyond, ¶
I want to assure you that the Board, management team and employees of Provident remain dedicated to carrying forward the Company’s reputation and legacy, just as we have since our founding. We will remain true to our community banking roots and focus on serving the families and small businesses of the Inland Empire. That heritage is central to who we are, and we intend to build on it in the years to come.
In closing, I would likewant to recognize and thank our employees and Directors for their commitment and service to Provident. Their efforts make our success possible. I also extend my sincere appreciation to our customers, shareholders, and the communities we serve for the confidence you place in us. Our continued success depends on the trust you place in Provident, and we are grateful for the opportunity to serve you.
Sincerely,
/s/ Craig G. Blunden
Craig G. Blunden
Chairman of the Board of Directors
03 · REQUEST 2
"Now cut it to about 600 words for the web"
What the communications officer typed
Thanks. Please accept all of your tracked changes, then turn the letter into the web version in the same file, again with tracked changes so Craig can see what was cut: 1. Switch percentages to numerals with % (61%, 32%, 1%, 2%, 3%, 3.09%). 2. Cut the letter from about 1,100 words to about 600. Trim the interest-rate and real-estate commentary in the opening paragraphs first. 3. Keep the 'A Final Word' section in full. 4. Any figure that stays must keep its value. Financial Highlights stays untouched.
What did
- Kept working in the Word file it had delivered for request 1.
- Cut the letter from 1,082 words to 600. Most of the cut came from the opening on interest rates, the bond market and California real estate, as asked: those three paragraphs went from 429 words to 63.
- Also trimmed the sentences on deposit competition under "Fiscal 2026" and the last sentence under "Fiscal 2027".
- Wrote every percentage as a numeral with %: 61%, 32%, 1%, 2%, 3% and 3.09%, the same values as before.
- Left "A Final Word" word for word, and the Financial Highlights tables untouched.
Again the edits went straight into the file. The redline is the track-changes report on the request 1 and request 2 files, with the word count of each paragraph in the margin.
Message From the Chairman
Dear Fellow Shareholders:
I am pleased to forward our Annual Report for fiscal 2026 highlighting our financial results. Last year I noted in the Chairman’s Message that “… the market is expecting the easing of monetary policy to resume later this calendar year but we are cognizant of the weaker employment data that was recently released and its potential downstream impact on the economy. We are also observing some weaknesses in the California real estate market.” A year later, after three successive quarter-point reductions in the federal funds rate in the latter part of 2025, the Federal Open Market Committee, or FOMC, has held rates steady. At present, the market does not appear to expect additional interest rate cuts for the remainder of this year and possibly into 2027. Indeed, some market observers believe a rate hike is possible later this year. We have also seen an important shift in the bond market. The U.S. Treasury yield curve emerged from its extended inversion and returned to a more normal upward slope. As short-term rates have been anchored by the federal funds rate, longer-term bond yields have been steadily rising, further steepening the yield curve. This movement reflects continued uncertainty regarding inflation, the state of the federal budget deficit and the potential for geopolitical developments to create supply-chain or energy-related pressures.
For banks, a steeper yield curve can be beneficial. A bank’s net interest margin benefits from the widening spread between the cost of deposits and other short-term funding and yields earned on loans. New loans are being originated at higher rates, and adjustable-rate loans are repricing upward. At the same time, higher long-term rates weigh on the real estate market, especially in high-cost markets such as California. Mortgage payments have become increasingly unaffordable for prospective buyers, while many existing homeowners remain locked into mortgages with rates well below current levels. At the current level of mortgage rates, residential purchase and refinancing activities have been curtailed. Even so, California real estate values have been resilient. Prices have generally held up well across the markets we serve, reflecting the underlying strength in the economy and limited housing supply in our local communities.¶
In this evolving market, one thing remains constant: we are well positioned, supported by a strong capital position and pristine credit quality. Our long-standing credit culture has served us well and positioned the Company among the top performers across key credit quality metrics. Our goal is to remain good stewards of our capital by executing a strategy of disciplined, sustainable growth, conservative credit underwriting, and consistent returns of capital to our shareholders.¶
Fiscal 2026
Last year, I said our fiscal 2026 Business Plan reflected measured growth in loans and retail deposits, disciplined control of operating expenses, and sound capital management. Our financial results, described in the following Financial Highlights, reflected improved earnings compared to the prior year, despite a moderate decline in total assets.
50During fiscal 2026, as the yield curve normalized, we adjusted our strategy to support increased loan production. Following a 61 percent% increase in loan production during fiscal 2025, we achieved an additional 32 percent% increase in fiscal 2026. However, these production gains were fully offset by higher-than-normal levels of loan prepayments. As a result, our loans held for investment decreased by approximately one percent for the fiscal year. The deposit landscape remained challenging, as competition for deposits continued to be intense. Competitors of all sizes, including large national banks, aggressively marketed promotional deposit rates that remain elevated today, even as the FOMC lowered short-term rates in 2025. We made accommodations, as appropriate, to our pricing based on our evaluation of the customer relationships, while maintaining our pricing discipline, and augmented our funding needs with certificates of deposit and borrowings. Total deposits increased two percent during the fiscal year although transaction accounts declined three percent. Our net interest margin exceeded three percent for the year, reaching 3.09 percent1% for the fiscal year. Total deposits increased 2% during the fiscal year although transaction accounts declined 3%. Our net interest margin exceeded 3% for the year, reaching 3.09%, driven primarily by the repricing of Federal Home Loan Bank advances to lower rates as they matured. Despite inflationary pressures, operating expenses increased by less than one percent1% for the fiscal year. Finally, we recorded no loan charge-offs during fiscal 2026 — our eighth consecutive year without reporting a net charge-off.
Returning capital to our shareholders is a priority. During fiscal 2026, we maintained our quarterly cash dividend of $0.14 per share and increased our share repurchases to approximately 344,000 shares, compared to approximately 285,000 shares in fiscal 2025.
38Fiscal 2027
As we look to fiscal 2027, our priorities remain consistent: measured growth in loans and retail deposits; disciplined expense management; and sound capital management. We believe this approach is the right course in an economy that continues to expand, while recognizing the need to remain cautious amid ongoing market and geopolitical uncertainties. We expect to continue returning capital to shareholders through dividends and share repurchases while maintaining sufficient capital to support our business strategy and withstand potential losses under adverse conditions. We remain committed to single-family residential, multi-family, and commercial real estate mortgage lending as our primary sources of asset growth and our retail branch network will continue to serve as the primary source of the Bank’s funding.
A Final Word
This year, Provident proudly celebrates the 70th anniversary of its founding, serving the great city of Riverside and its surrounding communities. As the largest independent community bank headquartered in Riverside County, we are proud of our distinguished history as a trusted provider of banking services. Just as importantly, we are proud of the commitment demonstrated throughout our organization to strengthen the communities we serve through volunteer service, charitable support and community investment. As we look to the year ahead and beyond, I want to assure you that the Board, management team and employees of Provident remain dedicated to carrying forward the Company’s reputation and legacy, just as we have since our founding. We will remain true to our community banking roots and focus on serving the families and small businesses of the Inland Empire. That heritage is central to who we are, and we intend to build on it in the years to come.
154In closing, I want to recognize and thank our employees and Directors for their commitment and service to Provident. Their efforts make our success possible. I also extend my sincere appreciation to our customers, shareholders, and the communities we serve for the confidence you place in us. Our continued success depends on the trust you place in Provident, and we are grateful for the opportunity to serve you.
68Sincerely,
/s/ Craig G. Blunden
Craig G. Blunden
Chairman of the Board of Directors
Financial Highlights
The following tables set forth information concerning the consolidated financial position and results of operations of the Corporation and its subsidiary at the dates and for the periods indicated.
| (In Thousands, Except Per Share Information) | 2026 | 2025 | 2024 | 2023 | 2022 |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| FINANCIAL CONDITION DATA: | |||||
| Total assets | $1,208,161 | $1,245,613 | $1,272,200 | $1,332,948 | $1,187,038 |
| Loans held for investment, net | 1,032,682 | 1,045,745 | 1,052,979 | 1,077,629 | 939,992 |
| Cash and cash equivalents | 49,210 | 53,090 | 51,376 | 65,849 | 23,414 |
| Investment securities | 90,523 | 111,006 | 131,900 | 156,492 | 188,421 |
| Deposits | 910,383 | 888,772 | 888,348 | 950,571 | 955,504 |
| Borrowings | 157,046 | 213,073 | 238,500 | 235,009 | 85,000 |
| Stockholders’ equity | 126,220 | 128,545 | 129,941 | 129,687 | 128,650 |
| Book value per share | 20.15 | 19.54 | 18.98 | 18.41 | 17.66 |
| OPERATING DATA: | |||||
| Interest income | $55,889 | $56,624 | $54,730 | $45,992 | $34,730 |
| Interest expense | 19,561 | 21,155 | 19,807 | 9,007 | 3,135 |
| Net interest income | 36,328 | 35,469 | 34,923 | 36,985 | 31,595 |
| (Recovery of) provision for credit losses | (553) | (666) | (63) | 374 | (2,462) |
| Net interest income after (recovery of) provision for credit losses | 36,881 | 36,135 | 34,986 | 36,611 | 34,057 |
| Loan servicing and other fees | 583 | 419 | 337 | 414 | 1,056 |
| Deposit account fees | 1,067 | 1,112 | 1,154 | 1,296 | 1,302 |
| Card and processing fees | 1,203 | 1,265 | 1,384 | 1,525 | 1,639 |
| Other non-interest income | 873 | 735 | 1,066 | 840 | 719 |
| Operating expenses | 30,971 | 30,793 | 28,540 | 28,270 | 25,915 |
| Income before income taxes | 9,636 | 8,873 | 10,387 | 12,416 | 12,858 |
| Provision for income taxes | 2,981 | 2,618 | 3,036 | 3,824 | 3,765 |
| Net income | $6,655 | $6,255 | $7,351 | $8,592 | $9,093 |
| Basic earnings per share | $1.04 | $0.93 | $1.06 | $1.20 | $1.23 |
| Diluted earnings per share | $1.03 | $0.93 | $1.06 | $1.19 | $1.22 |
| Cash dividend per share | $0.56 | $0.56 | $0.56 | $0.56 | $0.56 |
Edits inside the annual report, not a pasted rewrite
Most AI tools hand the letter back as chat text, and someone pastes it into the report again. works in the Word file itself, leaves the figures and tables alone, and its track-changes report shows the reviewer every edit.
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